My Persuasive Zoo Writing

Should we have zoos?

Animals should have a home and be kept in zoos

 

In my opinion, We should have zoos since they give animals a home and they care for them. Also, it’s a fun and entertaining place. ( You can also learn a lot )

 

The main reason why I think we should have zoos is because animals get to have a home and people get to learn about animals that they may want to learn about.

 

Another reason is that if we don’t have zoos then the animals wont have a home.

 

The reason I think we should have zoos is because its a fun and entertaining place and if we didn’t have zoos then the animals wouldn’t have a home and that’s not good.

So, that is why I believe that we should have zoos and that the animals should be kept in zoos.

The Day I Shrunk

* Keyboard Tapping * Teacher: Can  you all come to the mat for 5 minutes please. Students: Okay * walks to the mat* Teacher: Okay now we are going to do some maths for a while. Now who knows what 12×11 is? Evelyn: * Mumbles* Ugh why do we even have to do maths everyday, it’s just sooo boring! Teacher: Evelyn you do know I can hear you right? Evelyn: * Mocks* You know I can hear you right. Evelyn says in a squeaky voice as she teases Mrs Atticus. As I sat and watched Evelyn misbehave I felt a weird tingly feeling in my hand sort of like it was shrinking… and well…it was! My entire body, was shrinking! I didn’t know what to do! At least everybody wasn’t looking at me. I sighed with relief that before I started to actually shrink I asked to go to the bathroom.I was alone, half my body average size the other half well…tiny! Once I completely shrank, I panicked. What should I do? Where will I go! Will I be stuck like this forever!? I sat against the wall in disappointment and horror. I thought through it for a while…suddenly I stood up! I dusted myself off andddd…sat..right…back…down. I needed a plan, and fast! It’s not like I could be stuck like this forever. Aha! I said. It was the perfect plan. I said with a smirk on my face.My best friend “ Gracelyn “ came into the bathroom, when she opened the bathroom door I made a run for it .Phew! I sighed with relief. Unfortunately Gracelyn Noticed that her friend (me) had walked out the bathroom, even though I was tiny she still saw me! “ Hi Gracelyn “ I squealed. Yes…She fainted. I had to get out of there before she woke up so I flashed through the classroom door and into my bag. My ears were aching from the loud voices. Then the worst happened, Mrs. Atticus asked the class if they had seen Gracelyn or I! Then my eyes were heavy and * Thud * . The next day. * Yawn* “ AHHHHHH “ I yelled. “ Do you hear an ant screaming? “ Sara whispered to Jayda. “ No? “ Jayda responded. RING RING went the bell. The whole class had left and I was relieved. “ pstt, “ Said Gracelyn. “ AHHHHHH “ I shouted. Gracelyn was tiny as well as me! I was shocked and exhausted and suddenly * Yawn *  “ Well Well Well, So my plan worked.” Said a Man with a very very deep voice. The strange Man’s voice started to fade away. I looked around the laboratory and saw the most unfortunate thing that I had ever seen! Lab Coats, Potions Galore and The thing I was most ANGRY about was the potion that goes by the name Shrinking Potion. I suddenly leaped out of the scientists hand and I grabbed that potion like a hungry lion. I poured the potion on the scientist and…Yeah there were side effects. The End.

My Creative Writing

Task Description: For this task I had to write a creative story.

The Tree

 

I stood there standing in front of that tree confused.I hesitated to observe the tree. I decided to do it.I spotted a large round yellow object hanging off the side of the tree. I felt it…just a bit.I’ve never seen anything like it before.It was weird and squishy but still slightly sticky. My curiosity took over and forced me to go touch it again. That was a horrible idea. A swarm of bees came right at me with their razor sharp stingers and blazing red hot eyes! I was terrified. “Phew!” I sighed with relief. I ran back home just to realize my house had turned into a huge beehive! I ran to my best friend’s house which was only across the road so it was easy to go to. I knocked on the door, my heart racing like a cheetah. “ Oh hello Jamie “ Smiled Starry’s mum. “ Hello! “ I said with my eyes wide open. “ May I come inside? “ I asked. “ Sure,” she said. “She’s just upstairs.” I thanked her and swooshed my way up the stairs. “ Starry! “ I said. “ Oh hi Jamie “ She said. “ Come with me! “ The both of us ran downstairs. I brought Starry to the tree. She asked me a question but I didn’t  answer because I was in shock. The tree wasn’t there anymore! Starry and I walked back to Starrys house since my house was in a miniature bee apocalypse. I looked at my house once more before it was completely covered in bees… That same tree was on the roof of my house! Luckily a week later it was removed and I was able to move back into my house. That same night I went to bed but something just didn’t feel right. I heard a noise downstairs so I went to go see what it was. My Mum had turned into a ginormous queen bee! The End.